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Old 09-13-2002, 12:34 PM
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WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THIS SONG?
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I like to write songs,but I have trouble sharing them.I tried sharing them at other forums but I get no comments and just gay ass replies so I am gonna try here.I am just looking for some positive or negative comments.Just wanna see what some people think.I haven't got a name for this song yet,but it is finished.It is kinda supposed to be punk rock(like blink 182 and stuff)I don't think it is that bad.

I loved you than and I love still/You think I won't but I always will/I love your hair and your pretty smile/Give me a chance I'll make it worth your while/I love your voice and I love your eyes/But I'm not better than those other guys/So I can only sit here and dream/Wishing that you'd show some feelings for me/I look at you/ I look at me/No wonder it was never meant to be/I'm so ugly/Your so pretty/My people skills are lame/So ****ty/I only wish I could get a girl like you/I could never win after all I've been through/My life just sucks/It always will/I was lame than/Actually I am lame still/I don't know what you like about those other guys/They act like they're all that/But it's all just lies/I had a chance with you back than/But I guess I blew it/You never return my calls/But I'm used to it/So even though my chances of dating you are small/I'd rather be your friend/Than not have you in my life at all/I guess I should just give up/I could never win/I ran out of luck/Sometimes I wish I was taller/I wish I was stronger/I wish my life/Wouldn't last much longer/I look at you/I look at me/No wonder it was never meant to be/I'm so ugly/Your so pretty/My people skills are lame/So ****ty/I only wish I could get a girl like you/I could never win after all I've been through/My life just sucks/It always will/I was lame than/Actually I am lame still

Later I might add on more to it but at the moment I will keep it like this,I am currently working on another one.Here it is,it's called School.This one needs alot of work and I just started it.I hope to have alot more done within a few days.

The alarm goes off/As I hop out of bed/Where I'm going today/Makes me wish I was dead/5 days a week/6 hours a day/I hate you all/This ****'s so gay/
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Old 09-13-2002, 12:54 PM
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Nice song ... would be very cool with soft rock music
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Old 09-13-2002, 01:16 PM
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check the link, mine that i wrote is there as well.....well part of it anyway
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Mark 8:34-38 And he called to him the multitude with his disciples, and said to them, "If any man would come after me, let him deny himself and take up his cross and follow me. For whoever would save his life will lose it;and whoever loses his life for my sake and the gospel's will save it. For what does it profit a man, to gain the whole world and forfeit his life? For what can a man give in return for his life? For whoever is ashamed of me and of my words in this adulterous and sinful generation, of him will the Son of man also be ashamed, when he comes in the glory of his Father with the holy angels."
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Old 09-13-2002, 02:15 PM
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Cool! ... I knew you were good @ something! But wasn't sure what!
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