Thread: Echoz need advice, and others too
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Old 06-06-2005, 02:13 AM
NaughtyPerry is offline NaughtyPerry
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Plain Echoz need advice, and others too
Not sure if this is any good, i been trying to work on my text for a while, and i thought this turned out alright... please can you criticize me on my text as much as you want as i need to improve.

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