WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THIS SONG?
 

Originally posted at FRICTION forum by:

COLDFIRE

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I like to write songs,but I have trouble sharing them.I tried sharing them at other forums but I get no comments and just gay ass replies so I am gonna try here.I am just looking for some positive or negative comments.Just wanna see what some people think.I haven't got a name for this song yet,but it is finished.It is kinda supposed to be punk rock(like blink 182 and stuff)I don't think it is that bad. I loved you than and I love still/You think I won't but I always will/I love your hair and your pretty smile/Give me a chance I'll make it worth your while/I love your voice and I love your eyes/But I'm not better than those other guys/So I can only sit here and dream/Wishing that you'd show some feelings for me/I look at you/ I look at me/No wonder it was never meant to be/I'm so ugly/Your so pretty/My people skills are lame/So shitty/I only wish I could get a girl like you/I could never win after all I've been through/My life just sucks/It always will/I was lame than/Actually I am lame still/I don't know what you like about those other guys/They act like they're all that/But it's all just lies/I had a chance with you back than/But I guess I blew it/You never return my calls/But I'm used to it/So even though my chances of dating you are small/I'd rather be your friend/Than not have you in my life at all/I guess I should just give up/I could never win/I ran out of luck/Sometimes I wish I was taller/I wish I was stronger/I wish my life/Wouldn't last much longer/I look at you/I look at me/No wonder it was never meant to be/I'm so ugly/Your so pretty/My people skills are lame/So shitty/I only wish I could get a girl like you/I could never win after all I've been through/My life just sucks/It always will/I was lame than/Actually I am lame still Later I might add on more to it but at the moment I will keep it like this,I am currently working on another one.Here it is,it's called School.This one needs alot of work and I just started it.I hope to have alot more done within a few days. The alarm goes off/As I hop out of bed/Where I'm going today/Makes me wish I was dead/5 days a week/6 hours a day/I hate you all/This shit's so gay/

Nice song ... would be very cool with soft rock music ;)

check the link, mine that i wrote is there as well.....well part of it anyway

Cool! ... I knew you were good @ something! But wasn't sure what! :eek: :p