Echoz need advice, and others too
 

Not sure if this is any good, i been trying to work on my text for a while, and i thought this turned out alright... please can you criticize me on my text as much as you want as i need to improve.

Thanks

http://img292.echo.cx/img292/7291/erazor26jp.gif

People are starting to learn my name! :) I guess ive done something good. Text looks alright, very generic/common though.

Think it looks cool.

damn thats very nice

me likes, specially the color

sweet:D

very nice